Crit. Post

Jun. 25th, 2012 02:33 am
blamethenargles: (Default)
Mun Name: Terra
Contact: Sugoi Tera
Email: Yuuri-chan@hotmail.com, Sugoitera@aim.com, & Ritz.theDitz@yahoo.com
Personal LJ: [livejournal.com profile] ritztheditz 

Character: Luna Lovegood
Series: Harry Potter
Timeline: After Order of the Phoenix and before Half-Blood Prince

You know the drill. This is where to comment what I'm doing wrong with Luna or any other concerns you have.
blamethenargles: (My head up in the clouds)
Well... that was quite unpleasent. I do hope that everyone is doing okay. To think my own mother would attack me is quite shocking, but I suppose the event is to blame for that.
blamethenargles: (Well that's interesting.)

Hm... How odd... These events get weirder and weirder. I do believe that something like this happened in muggle history... right...? I believe it was World War II, if I remember right. Well, Rather both World Wars, but that's not the point.

[Luna happened to come across a ghoul that looked just like her dead mother. She doesn't show a lot of emotion, but more interest then anything.]

My, that's uncanny. I always believed I would be able to see my mother later once again, but I didn't realize that it would be this quick.

[She was slow, as she had already sprung to attack Luna as she deflected the attack using a spell.]

Protego!

[The video feed shuts off at the force of the spell]

[I'm not sure if that's the correct spell in mind, but I think it is.]

blamethenargles: (You don't say...)
[Luna is currently walking around. She's trying to talk/meet new people because she doesn't know a lot of people. The communicator is move with her as she walks. She pointed it to her]

My, there's so many people here. How do you all know so many people? I'd like to meet new people, too. It's far too lonely when there's no one to talk to.

[And on she walks again.]

[So... she's basically just trying to make new friends if this wasn't obvious enough. She feels too anti-social so far for me so I'm trying to fix that ._.]

blamethenargles: (You don't say...)
[It's nearly impossible to miss Luna. Why? Because she's wearing her odd fashion again. Right now, she's wearing her Hogwarts uniform, but one of her stockings got misplaced/taken, therefore one of them is black and the other is green. Even though she's in Ravenclaw, she seemed to misplace her correct tie as well. All she could find was a bright yellow tie. One of her shoes is a red converse while the other is her shoe that she wears with her uniform. As if having all the wrong house colors wasn't enough, she's also wearing her Spectrespecs and a red headband with a bow in back. Just think of the weirdest clothing and that's kind of what she'd look like.]

Huh... that's interesting. This place is so odd. It's almost... magical.

[Luna looked around, looking for nothing in particular. She itched her head. She didn't know how, but somehow made it outside the mansion. She didn't question it, though. That's how it was always like for her.]

So these events... are they always unpleasent?

[REPOST BECAUSE I'M LAZY: Okay, you guys, I'm so sorry! I'm still waiting to get my computer fixed and I may be a little slow, but I really feel odd if I DON'T post at all. It's got to be a week or 2 since I've last posted so, I just want something to show that I'm still here. Considering a lot happened, I don't know what I'm talking about, therefore trying to keep this simple and sweet. I'll post for my other characters, but it will be the same way. Forgive me you guys! ;_;]
blamethenargles: (What do you mean by "dotty"?)
[Luna seems to be more distant then ever during this event. She hasn't really met a lot of people, so this event really isn't helping much. Though, she seems too dazed to even realize that. She found herself in the garden.]

Ah, how did I get here...?

[Feel free to notice her or something. I'm not sure what to post for her. it's 4 am and I'm about to crash ._.']
blamethenargles: (I swear it's true!)

[You see as Luna is reading The Quibbler upsidedown with her wand stuck behind her ear for safe keeping. Though, it seems to be an older edition. She looks up to see the red light on.]


Ah, I have finally figured out how to use this. Father and I haven't actually used one of these muggle contraptions before. I think it was called a camcorder...?

Anyways, so what was the last event about? I really didn't see much change. Isn't there suppose to be more to these events? That is what I was told, anyways. Either way, I am glad that everyone is doing well.

[If you look closer, you'll see that she has one pink Converse on and one green hightop Converse on. She's also wearing striked stockings, thought one is red and the other is white striped. She has on a black dress over a long-sleeved white shirt.]

Oh, and it seems that my shoes have gone missing once again. Has anyone seen a pink Converse shoe around? I suspect the nargles are trying to play tricks on me again...
blamethenargles: (I swear it's true!)
[You see Luna reading the newest edition of The Quibbler, somehow or another. How'd she even get one? The closet? She had it backwards as she lied back in her bed with her wand behind her ear for safe keeping.]

The Spectrespecs cake are a lie? They got recalled for faulty sight... huh?

[The video times out after a while.]

[So... I'm not sure what to post for Luna for this event because she's so stuck in her own mind that she honestly believes there are things like Nargles that steal your belongings when it was just the other kids because they thought it was funny to pick on Luna, Heliopaths were real and that Fudge had an army of them when all reality they don't even exist, and that your commonly known brainfart was really due to Wrackspurts that you couldn't see without Spectrespecs make your brain go fuzzy.]
blamethenargles: (Well that's interesting.)
[Have a very confused girl. Though, when is that new? Luna woke up to find herself outside the mansion in the grass. She got up, patting the dirt and grass clippings off her clothing.]

Oh my.... Where is this place?

[She took that chance to take a look around with her naturally widened eyes. She looked mostly in awe.]


This is interesting. I don't remember coming this way. Perhaps it was because of the wrackspurts that I lost my place...?

Ah, well, it seems like it would be interesting here. I wonder if there's any pudding here...?


[The feed turns off on it's own as Luna sets out to find pudding. Preferably chocolate flavored.]
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